So I made a video to explain who DMH is about and revised it twice and Ameerah sent this back. So any feedback on what I should do?
"GREAT improvement--but it still needs a lot of work. You have to put yourself in the shoes of someone who isn't interested in the program. Share it on your blog and ask for feedback.I would tell you that it's not dynamic enough. And the quality of pics if low because I'm assuming you downloaded them off of FB. I'd remind you to get access to photobucket from Khadigah so you can add video to your work. Also, have blue words on an orange background looks very BLAH. I'd use white with orange and blue words. But we want there to be more movement! And don't feel bad about getting this feedback. You have improved dramatically since the first vid and it's only gonna get better. If we're afraid to fail or make mistakes, we'll never do anything great."
"GREAT improvement--but it still needs a lot of work. You have to put yourself in the shoes of someone who isn't interested in the program. Share it on your blog and ask for feedback.I would tell you that it's not dynamic enough. And the quality of pics if low because I'm assuming you downloaded them off of FB. I'd remind you to get access to photobucket from Khadigah so you can add video to your work. Also, have blue words on an orange background looks very BLAH. I'd use white with orange and blue words. But we want there to be more movement! And don't feel bad about getting this feedback. You have improved dramatically since the first vid and it's only gonna get better. If we're afraid to fail or make mistakes, we'll never do anything great."